Audience feedback

When we asked for feedback on our roughcut we were told that:

•  It was a good engima  that the audience couldn't see the main protagonists face as it adds mystery.
• It was good how some of the credits were instilled in the surroundings, for example on the white board was some of the credits, however they were too hard to read and not really typical of the genre.
• There needs to be more transition shots particularly towards the end of the opening credits.
• There was box showing that the main protagonist was being watched by someone, however this needs to be more obvious such as a shot of someone watching separately and not in a split screen "24" style approach.
• The close up effect on the eye was excellent as it was clear and you didn't see the face of the main protagonist. It was useful as further enigmas were dropped in such as counting money and firing a gun. This was shot in black and white to signify that it was a flashback. There was some confusion as why there was a split screen towards the end.

From this I have learned that overall I have a strong opening credits footage, however I do need to add more transition shots as well as possibly rectify the split screen towards the end.